SecretShadows06

About a month ago, my English class had to write suspense stories to share with everyone. I got my story back about a week ago and my teacher wanted me to consider sending it in to my school's lit-magazine, I wanted to get some feedback on it before I make a decide what I want to do. So this is "Fox Tracks" I hope you enjoy.                She kept walking, not listing to the voices trailing behind her. They called her name, they shouted for her to come back; she didn’t listen. The rain from the night before had left the ground soggy, now only a light drizzle fell from the cloudy sky. Her feet instinctively carried her to the one plac